Saturday, June 09, 2007

Nothing to lose

she walks in darkness
mindswill of cess-
pool dripping thoughts
verse shorts
through stories she tells
of the soul she sells.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

really....nothing to lose as per my interpretation.
it's a very nice piece leaving reader free to interpret...great one :-)

Anonymous said...

she stays in darkness,
empty soul,
head bursting to its seams.
sees light thru stories she tells,
hopes at times,
to have the void she loves,
filled.

she copies other's cesspool thoughts makes it her own. and hopes none of the three would mind

3inone said...

@sara,
feel free to interpret.
:-)

@rama
:-) hey, this is good.
And you're the second one I've inspired. Most of the time i don't even inspire myself, so it's a wondrous thing to have someone say I inspired them.