lazily it turns it curls and falls strands of twisted air a strangling fire follow it down stained brown sometimes yellow green too all tinged with gray the death of a leaf makes ashes of thoughts.
Hi! I have created an Orkut community called MCC bloggers and sent a badly-worded invitation to all of you whom I know about. Don’t know if I had the right idea, but do let me know what you think about it .... like, is it a good thing or bad. I haven’t put anything in the community space yet, so don’t get turned off by the sight of it :)
@ Life Happens: Oh... I'm quite bad at poetry interpretation (all my professors from college will vouch for this). But I do recognise good poetry when i see it :)
@life yes, it's a whole lot more than just a leaf. glad you liked it. @jimmy 'ashes of thoughts' was the pointer to the fact that the autumn leaf was a metaphor to the death of everything. That MCC blogger community - good idea!!
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aint nver been much into well crafted poetry...
but frm wt i get... if u r traying to draw a parallel to life... den its gr8 to c so much being said in such few words!
This one's about an autumn leaf, right? But what did the last line mean ("Makes ashes of thoughts"?
@ jimmy: i think here leaf stand for a lot more than just being an autumn leaf
Hi! I have created an Orkut community called MCC bloggers and sent a badly-worded invitation to all of you whom I know about.
Don’t know if I had the right idea, but do let me know what you think about it .... like, is it a good thing or bad.
I haven’t put anything in the community space yet, so don’t get turned off by the sight of it :)
Sending the same message to Shain and Div :)
@ Life Happens: Oh... I'm quite bad at poetry interpretation (all my professors from college will vouch for this). But I do recognise good poetry when i see it :)
@life
yes, it's a whole lot more than just a leaf. glad you liked it.
@jimmy
'ashes of thoughts' was the pointer to the fact that the autumn leaf was a metaphor to the death of everything.
That MCC blogger community - good idea!!
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